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Dearest Coterie (Gashi)-
I've just noticed that once again what I typed was not what was on
the paper. (I'm getting old and my proofreading ain't what it used to
be. I hate it when that happens!)
I only post revisions when the typo causes glaring discontinuity to
the rhythm of a piece or causes an interpretation differant from the
one that was intended.
This one is sort of bobsy-twins with Howie's "Rainy Day Parade."
They're both from the same idea of someone being in their own little
world and observing the "real world" from their perspective.
And feedback is welcome. I don't bite!
Enjoi!
-Scotty
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"Crazy Street"
Dawn comes in the lime sky.
It's dreamy but what can I say?
Another day.
Life forms build a garage
in the sunset.
Taking what little they can get
of the warmth of the sun.
You tell me where it begun,
light on the water.
And dancing out on crazy street
is the best.
Waltzing out in time
with all the rest.
Sunset comes in mid-stream.
Bother me with questions.
Asking why why why?
Turn your face to the sky.
It's yours.
You asked for it.
And dancing out on crazy street
is the best.
Waltzing out in time
with all the rest.
© by C.S. Snow / Indigo 2007 (ASCAP)
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