Hi, my name is Dee and i am the new one. I have rediscoverd my writing talent
thanks to
NaNoWriMo, and thanks to the library found you guys.

I have uploaded my first unfinished draft of my novel(about 55k), and
well...have at it. I am
tinking of turning Red on White into a trilogy, i recon i could get enough
material out of it for
that. It would split where the perspective turns entirely to Guy and split again
when he
returns.
I am already rewriting the beginning, because it feels quite boring. I have
started at the break
down of the car, but i am not quite sure how to keep it exciting. My characters
just seem to
be talking to themselves a lot.

So yeah, critique away, but don't rip it apart yet. I am quite proud of it
really. :)