Alright Honey,

Once again your words of encouregment do wonders for my esteem. When reading
those stories before submitting them to Mark (bit of an accident that I sent
them to everyone) I just felt they were childish, full of glaringly obvious
flaws leaping from the page to shout Ametuer production. I'm too fond of
voiced pauses, the narrattor always talks to the audiamce, which seems to be
a habit i can not break but then it is a story telling method. I like the
technique, only I have to improve it.

Ive started writing a novel! Its in 1st draft, long hand and I'm having
trouble with finding a voice and tense. When i type it up im gonna send you
first prpoer draft.

Any news on new years eve?

See you soon
Pete

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