Pete,
Cheers for posting your stories. I promise to stop
ribbing you about it now.

Vicky,
Did you get my 'welcome' Email? If not, welcome to
Derby Scribes.

Mark




--- Peter Borg <uncleharrypotter@...> wrote:

> Alright Honey,
>
> Once again your words of encouregment do wonders for
> my esteem. When reading
> those stories before submitting them to Mark (bit of
> an accident that I sent
> them to everyone) I just felt they were childish,
> full of glaringly obvious
> flaws leaping from the page to shout Ametuer
> production. I'm too fond of
> voiced pauses, the narrattor always talks to the
> audiamce, which seems to be
> a habit i can not break but then it is a story
> telling method. I like the
> technique, only I have to improve it.
>
> Ive started writing a novel! Its in 1st draft, long
> hand and I'm having
> trouble with finding a voice and tense. When i type
> it up im gonna send you
> first prpoer draft.
>
> Any news on new years eve?
>
> See you soon
> Pete
>
>
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