Just written a quick script in which Buster's Evil Eye has an
encounter with another Fleetway character. 2 pages of 8 uncluttered
panels each. Let me know if anyone is interested. Script is below.

Also, got a war/sci-fi script coming very soon. I've written the story
but can't think who the characters are! 6 pages long.

Chris
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EVIL EYE v SHINER by Chris Smillie (2007)
EE = Evil Eye; S = Shiner; <> = artist direction; [] = text box

Anticipate two pages of 8 panels, plus a splash page.

Splash
<Traditional opening title to Evil Eye>
[as originally seen in Buster comic!]
<EE seen in virtually all panels floating around>
Panel 1
<EE is floating over a crowd of people in a fairground> EE: Hmmm it's
been so long since anyone saw me
Panel 2
EE: Maybe the readers have forgotten just why I'm called Evil Eye!
Panel 3
<EE is flying over a boy in the crowd - he's actually Shiner but we
don't know that yet - no black eye and looking quite innocent> EE: Ah,
he looks exactly the kind of boy I'm looking for!
Panel 4
ZZZAAAPPP<EE zaps Shiner, S looks like he's had an electric shock> EE:
Now for some mischief!!
Panel 5
<now looks confused> S: I promised Mum I wouldn't get into trouble but...
Panel 6
<looking evil and smiling with merry-go-round behind him> S: Now I
feel really naughty!
Panel 7
<see a hand trip a SOFTY SLOW-FAIRLY FAST-STUPIDLY QUICK switch on a
dashboard> S: This should liven it up!
Panel 8
<the Merry-Go-Round is whizzing with the children holding on for dear
life - might be nice to have a few characters on it such as Ball Boy,
Cheeky, Sweet Tooth or whoever> <kids are all screaming for help>
Panel 9
<replaces the hammer of a Test-Your-Strength with a rubber mallet - a
sign points out that the hammer is rubber> S: This should be a giggle!
Panel 10
<a big lad - maybe someone like Fit Fred or some other Fleetway comic
bully not seen in a few years- picks up the mallet ready to smack down>
Panel 11
<as he brings the hammer down, it rebounds and catches him full on the
face>
Panel 12
<S is doubled up in fits of laughter> E: That was really evil! Heh-heh.
Panel 13
<the big lad is rolling up his sleeve ready to punch S> So you think
that's funny!!!
Panel 14
SMACK! <S is caught full on the face by a punch>
Panel 15
<S cannot be seen for a cheering crowd> EE: Hee-hee! That was
fun...hang on, why is everyone cheering?
Panel 16
<Shiner is in his pose that would open Chips comic with a blackeye and
smile and the title of SHINER> S: I don't know what happened there
readers but it's got me back into a comic! <EE is slinking away at
the bottom of the page> EE: Curses! Foiled again!
<bottom line of page>
[Also starring Shiner (Whizzer & Chips)] <do the same with whatever
other characters you use, e.g. Cheeky (Krazy)>