Hi Jay,

Thanks, and I will read the story you mentioned. Oh and yeah its fine
to call me Andy lol.

Andrew

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<nifty_reader81@h...> wrote:
> Hey Andy (mind if i call ya this?? ;) )
>
> Well personally I completely agree with u about chap 8, if you don't
> like to change POVs in-between... But because the plot has started
> now I think you can expand your horizons to wider perspective, and
> then eventually the chapter will be bigger.
>
> Since this is your first story (a great one for a first BTW) I recon
> you should explore more… I recon you should take a look at an
> awesome story a bit like yours, "Say You Love Me" by Phoenix at
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/phoenix_587/files/Say%20You%20Love%
> 20Me/
> , so you could get some thing out of it, may be you can write to the
> guy… Hey but don't lose your authenticity; be your self and follow
> your instincts, that's why your stories are so good.
>
> Cheers
> Jay
>
>
>
>
>
> >
> > Hi Jay,
> >
> > Thanks, it would be interesting to know what people think about
> this.
> > Personally I didn't think that chapter 8 could go on for much
> longer
> > because the point of view needed to be changed and I don't like
> > changing half way through. I didn't even know other members could
> > create polls, but now I know you can then feel free to add them.
> >
> > This is to Aleck, for some reason your post didn't go through
> maybe I
> > clicked the wrong button to approve it. Could you please re-post it
> > please?
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Andrew xx