Hey Andy (mind if i call ya this?? ;) )

Well personally I completely agree with u about chap 8, if you don't
like to change POVs in-between... But because the plot has started
now I think you can expand your horizons to wider perspective, and
then eventually the chapter will be bigger.

Since this is your first story (a great one for a first BTW) I recon
you should explore more… I recon you should take a look at an
awesome story a bit like yours, "Say You Love Me" by Phoenix at
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/phoenix_587/files/Say%20You%20Love%
20Me/
, so you could get some thing out of it, may be you can write to the
guy… Hey but don't lose your authenticity; be your self and follow
your instincts, that's why your stories are so good.

Cheers
Jay





>
> Hi Jay,
>
> Thanks, it would be interesting to know what people think about
this.
> Personally I didn't think that chapter 8 could go on for much
longer
> because the point of view needed to be changed and I don't like
> changing half way through. I didn't even know other members could
> create polls, but now I know you can then feel free to add them.
>
> This is to Aleck, for some reason your post didn't go through
maybe I
> clicked the wrong button to approve it. Could you please re-post it
> please?
>
> Thanks,
>
> Andrew xx

Leave Andrew alone, he is writing the story in his spare time so let
him get on with it. If he is busy, be patient!!

--- In highschool_love_story@..., "nifty_reader81"
<nifty_reader81@h...> wrote:
> Hey guys there's a new poll just to see what dya think of the length
> of the chapters and how often ma boy Andrew should publish them. let
> us know what dya think…
>
> Cheers
> Jay

Hi Jay,

Thanks, it would be interesting to know what people think about this.
Personally I didn't think that chapter 8 could go on for much longer
because the point of view needed to be changed and I don't like
changing half way through. I didn't even know other members could
create polls, but now I know you can then feel free to add them.

This is to Aleck, for some reason your post didn't go through maybe I
clicked the wrong button to approve it. Could you please re-post it
please?

Thanks,

Andrew xx

Hey guys there's a new poll just to see what dya think of the length
of the chapters and how often ma boy Andrew should publish them. let
us know what dya think…

Cheers
Jay

loving all the updates and how the story is progressing hope josh and
shaun become a couple soon

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Thanks!

Hey!

Chapter 9 has now been posted. It is the second part of chapter 8, but
with a different point of view.

There is a poll in the polls section, could you please vote,

Hope you enjoy it and thanks for reading,

Andrew x

Hey,

Just to let you know, Chapter 8 has now been posted. It isn't very
long, but the next chapter will definately be uploaded tomorrow and
will start working on it now.

Also, sometimes there is a bit of problem with Yahoo!Groups and if you
stay on the Files page for too long then you get a page saying the
stories don't exist. All you need to do is to refresh the page and it
should work. If not, go back to the home page and start again from
there.

Thanks for reading and for waiting sooo long,

Andrew xx

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still loving this blossoming subtle written love story of shaun and
josh looking forward to more to come from this cute pairing

Hi,

I have now posted chapter 7 for you all to read. I have also put polls
on the group so you can vote after each chapter is posted.

Thankyou for reading,

Andrew

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Hey Guys,

Sorry about the long delay in between chapters, but I have been busy
with work. I plan on having another chaoter up on the group very soon!

Thankyou for your patience,

Andrew Roberts

i just found the story on my childhood becouse i loved a girl in
school life. i loved her very deeply ,her name was Afifa Rizvi. it is
a great depiction of life in

when r u going to write a new Ch.?

i just found the story on nifty. i loved it. it is a great depiction
of life in high school and how the gay teen thinks in that sort of
society. im only 18 and know what that is like i graduated last year
and had many crushes on boys in my class and i know how 'Josh' feels
he really talks to me. i also love the way you have shown the
sensitive side of gay culture rather than depicting us as crazed sex
fiend deviants as many other 'authors' do.

Hi,

I'm now starting work on the sixth chapter. Apologies for not
posting for a while, but I've had a lot of assignments to get
through. Most of them are sorted now just a couple more left and a
few exams then I can hopefully post more frequently.

As I haven't posted on a while I will be posting the un-edited
version onto the group so that you don't have to wait for it to be
edited.

Thanks for sticking around,

Andrew

Hi Guys,

There has been a bit of a delay on chapter 6 because I have been
busy with University work. I will try and get the next chapter out
soon.

For those members that have signed up for special notices only: From
now on when a new chapter is posted you will not recieve a message,
but when there is a delayed chapter, the messages will be sent as a
special notice.

Thanks,

Andrew Roberts (18)

I really like your story and i would like to read more

Hey! I've read your chapters in the website....So far it's been
quite interesting and original. I like the fact that it doesn't
merely involve extreme sexual content, but rather a sincere story.
Well, I would also like to know if anybody here is a teenager? Is
anyone from the ages 15-18? Just figured to exchange messages and
see if we have anything in common. Also, does anybody know any
interesting websites with galleries of shirtless guys or men in
their underwear (NOT the R-rated photos, just simply attractive
photos).

Hi,

Chapter 5 has just been added to the files section.

If you have any suggestions or comments on the story then you can
send a post to the group or email me directly.

Thanks and hope you enjoy the next chapter,

Andrew Roberts

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Hi,

Chapter 4 is now finished and has been added to the files section.

Also, I have added a database called schedule, which will tell you
when I expect to have the next chapter out. Usually I will get the
chapter out before the date.

Thanks,

Andrew

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