Good grief - you temptress! I've read virtually nothing in the way of fic for ages because I simply don't have the time. And then I saw you'd posted something with a NC-17 rating! I defy anyone to resist that!

Martha writing teh pr0n - and you did it brilliantly.

It wasn't in the least clinical or mechanical, if that's what you were wibbling about. You hit the perfect note, in my opinion. I could envision it clearly. The way they spoke to each other, the teasing, the roughhousing - all seemed exactly right. Two randy teenage boys who love each other, but aren't in the least 'hearts and flowery' about it. Harry wishing he could top more often, but understanding Ron's reasoning for being reluctant, and therefore not pushing it (yet?), was just right for Hufflepuff Harry. Ron's possessiveness underlined his need for control nicely, as did the little suggestions of dominance (pinning Harry to the bed until he promises to 'behave', and making him wait until Ron was ready, for example).

And then you threw in lots and lots of intriguing plot hints, and I really want to know more about this universe you've created. What exactly do James et al do? And then there's Ron and the mystery of his horoscope. In fact there were a lot of questions floating around in my head after reading this. I just know I'm going to be re-reading everything else in this universe, because you've probably answered some of them in previous parts and I've simply forgotten.

Sigh. Maybe I'll just go to bed later; get some extra time that way. Because I still haven't caught up with all the TH stuff, and I'll probably need to do some re-reading for that, too.

RL sucks.

I really liked this piece. And who needs an excuse to write pr0n? It's pretty much a public service. Isn't it?

Hugs,
Matty.