Matroushka <Matroushka@...> wrote:

 

Hi Matty :-)

 

>>Good grief - you temptress! I've read virtually nothing in the way of fic for ages because I simply don't have the time. And then I saw you'd posted something with a NC-17 rating! I defy anyone to resist that!<<

 

*blush*

>>Martha writing teh pr0n - and you did it brilliantly.<<

 

*shuffles* Thank you :-)

>>It wasn't in the least clinical or mechanical, if that's what you were wibbling about. You hit the perfect note, in my opinion. I could envision it clearly.<<

 

Thanks for this :-) I don't know if I've said this here before, but I have a problem with writing sex (obviously) so when I do write it, the scene generally has to be written all in one go, regardless of length. I might go back to it later and edit it a little, but if I stop in the middle of the scene and leave it, it never gets finished. Since I also have to be in the right frame of mind anyway, it can be a bit inconvenient and leads to me writing at odd times, like in the middle of the night ... and that's a nuisance because I might be tired or a bit stressed by trying to get it all done in one go and that's when I worry that some of the 'action' might not be believeable or whatever.

 

*headshake*

 

>>The way they spoke to each other, the teasing, the roughhousing - all seemed exactly right. Two randy teenage boys who love each other, but aren't in the least 'hearts and flowery' about it. Harry wishing he could top more often, but understanding Ron's reasoning for being reluctant, and therefore not pushing it (yet?), was just right for Hufflepuff Harry. Ron's possessiveness underlined his need for control nicely, as did the little suggestions of dominance (pinning Harry to the bed until he promises to 'behave', and making him wait until Ron was ready, for example).<<

 

I really do need to write a Ron POV story in this universe. It would be a lot of fun to explore his side of things :-) He and Harry have a complicated relationship, but I think they respect each other at the base of it.

>>And then you threw in lots and lots of intriguing plot hints, and I really want to know more about this universe you've created. What exactly do James et al do? And then there's Ron and the mystery of his horoscope. In fact there were a lot of questions floating around in my head after reading this. I just know I'm going to be re-reading everything else in this universe, because you've probably answered some of them in previous parts and I've simply forgotten. <<

 

I'm still working a lot of this out. I have a definite idea of what James and the others are up to now, and I definitely need to look more at Ron's birthmark and how he and Harry fit together. I have quite a few questions myself, I'm afraid!

>>RL sucks.<<

 

Does it ever.

>>I really liked this piece. And who needs an excuse to write pr0n? It's pretty much a public service. Isn't it?<<

 

*snicker* That's as good a reason as any in my book! Thanks for reading - I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

 

Mad Martha