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Re: FAILER

I have tried editing your new poem:

> Failure (or Failed)
>
> There is a small bird that I can see
>
> outside, hopping about,so unfair it`s tormenting me
>
> this never happen when I go out
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> I only want to play with you,I almost shout
>
> ________________________-
>
> someone tell me where did I a hunter cat go wrong?
>
> can`t catch me the bird`s chant in a cheeky song
>
> stop and watch the mice scurry all over the place
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> then leisurely wash my face
>
> ___________________
>
> I just can`t kill anything, a failure(failed) hunter cat you see
>
> is this why they all delight in tormenting me?
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> how I love the thrill of a chase
>
> but just when I catch my prey,a strong urge gets me and I have to
clean my face
>

Well done! Only one aberrant apostrophe. (get's)

Dick







Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:33 pm

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Hi this is about a pet of our`s a cat, and a recent effort of mine. Valerie Failer There is a small bird that I can see outside, hopping about,so unfair it`s...
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Feb 20, 2006
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... clean my face ... Well done! Only one aberrant apostrophe. (get's) Dick...
Dick Eburne
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Feb 23, 2006
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thank you , I am trying to behave as regards apostrophy`s etc but they do keep sneaking in Valerie ... clean my face ... Well done! Only one aberrant...
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