I have tried editing your new poem:
> Failure (or Failed)
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> There is a small bird that I can see
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> outside, hopping about,so unfair it`s tormenting me
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> this never happen when I go out
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> I only want to play with you,I almost shout
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> ________________________-
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> someone tell me where did I a hunter cat go wrong?
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> can`t catch me the bird`s chant in a cheeky song
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> stop and watch the mice scurry all over the place
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> then leisurely wash my face
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> ___________________
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> I just can`t kill anything, a failure(failed) hunter cat you see
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> is this why they all delight in tormenting me?
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> how I love the thrill of a chase
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> but just when I catch my prey,a strong urge gets me and I have to
clean my face
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Well done! Only one aberrant apostrophe. (get's)
Dick