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Here y'all go. Three more before I leave for the weekend. I realize
that the first one is more geared toward the US, so it probably isn't
as funny overseas. Plus it's a ribbing on early 90s pop culture.
Thank you for any critiques you may have. It will only help me get
better.

1. http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107160

2. http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107161

3. http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107162

cheers,

Paul

Thu May 10, 2007 2:48 pm

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Here y'all go. Three more before I leave for the weekend. I realize that the first one is more geared toward the US, so it probably isn't as funny overseas....	strongbadforawesome strongbadfor...	May 10, 2007 2:49 pm
I'm not an expert here by any stretch of the imagination, and literary criticism is definitely not my strength....but....I think that you should attempt to be...	Kurt Van Hook kurtvanhook	May 10, 2007 5:00 pm
Hi! I know that if I have to explain a cartoon then it probably isn't funny, and plus, if it was even a little funny then it won't be after explaining it...	Paul strongbadfor...	Jun 16, 2007 5:55 pm
I stand corrected... ... http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107160 ... http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107161 ... ...	Kurt Van Hook kurtvanhook	Jun 18, 2007 11:23 am
Kurt, Hi. I came up with the first three a day or two ago, and I just came up with the last three just now. Am I improving any? Or do I just not have the idea...	Paul strongbadfor...	Jun 22, 2007 2:44 am
... Enh. There's some funny concepts there, but they're spoiled by your execution. Take "5" for example. Concept: Coach expects team members to get physical....	d_hemming	Jun 22, 2007 9:18 pm
Dave, Thanks for all the input! I can see what you are saying and it makes sense. I'm a fairly funny writer, but that's a lot easier than comics because I...	Paul strongbadfor...	Jun 26, 2007 2:40 pm
You're spot on - it's much harder for those of us at the top of the RMCS tree (or more general 3-panel humour) to write a funny article. If we try we tend to...	d_hemming	Jun 26, 2007 10:31 pm

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