I'm not an expert here by any stretch of the
imagination, and literary criticism is definitely not
my strength....but....I think that you should attempt
to be funny when authoring any future comics. Try to
be humorous.

--- strongbadforawesome
<strongbadforawesome@...> wrote:

>
>
> Here y'all go. Three more before I leave for the
> weekend. I realize
> that the first one is more geared toward the US, so
> it probably isn't
> as funny overseas. Plus it's a ribbing on early 90s
> pop culture.
> Thank you for any critiques you may have. It will
> only help me get
> better.
>
> 1.
>
http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107160
>
>
> 2.
>
http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107161
>
>
> 3.
>
http://monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=107162
>
>
> cheers,
>
> Paul
>
>
>
>