egotopic wrote:
> Here are some entries to the Open i would very much like to get some feedback
on. Positive enthusiastic feedback that is. You are welcome to exult my genius
if you will. In case there's something wrong with you and you failed to
appreciate the blinding brilliance of my works, i invite you to offer me a
membership so i can vote negatively on all your strips. If you were just
incapable of grasping the profound nature of my art, do not feel frustrated, it
eludes me too sometimes.
>
> Here's the menu:
> http://www.monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=226679

Very mildly amusing. Not particularly meaty.


> http://www.monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=226673

Who is Robin? Who is the dead clown? Normally he's the dead clown, but I
don't think that's so here. So not terribly meaty and didn't work as a
joke for me.


> http://www.monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=226692

Your best yet. Meaty and it almost works. I'd probably give it a 4, but
at least it's on the board.


> http://www.monkeydyne.com/rmcs/opencomic.phtml?rowid=226706
>

High concept for a silly joke. Works sometimes. Didn't work for me here.