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Sorry it's been a while but I've been busy writing. Both Gatekeeper:
Secret of the Key and Legacy are currently going quite well.

I had a few hairy moments with Chapter 2 of Gatekeeper. The first
draft had over 4 pages of turgid exposition. I've cut that in half (at
least) though it still needs work to give it some snap and crackle.
I'm also cutting whole chunks of both Chapter 2 and 3 and merging
them. Should make the whole chapter more tense and exciting. I'm
really dreading the next few chapters though... I need to make them
shorter, tighter and more tense without them seeming rushed. Not an
easy task but I'll manage.

The other stries are all still in stasis. We'll see what happens.

Oh, and I have a favour to ask you guys. You like my stuff right? Go
to my LJ and answer the survey there. Please?

And if you could introduce something of mine to a friend who you think
would like it I'd be eternally grateful :-) We need to grow. See poll
to follow...







Thu Mar 16, 2006 8:18 pm

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