Oh here we go again. Can you at least make your stories a bit bigger. I
know that the element of suspense and the wait for the next episode is all well
and exciting but it would ne nice to have a bit more to read.

Apart from that, a nice beginning. Good choice for the hero of the story, I
imagine that Olly often hums a few lines of 'what I go to school for' along with
other busted classsics when he is bored.

Emma Offer <sizimizi@...> wrote:

A moody young man sat, hunched, watching the rain from under a tree.
Although the large branches above protected him from most of the wet,
the occasional drip found its way onto his person and he was not
happy. His attempts to light a fire had been dismal in the extreme
and he didn't want to waste the power of the clarinet on such a
simple thing as keeping warm! His horse was tied a few feet away and
looked equally fed up.
Bored, he started humming a few lines of "What I go to school for"
when, suddenly, he heard what he had been expecting – the snap of a
twig a few feet away. Without a break in the hum, he slowly put one
hand next to him and grasped the base of the clarinet.
He heard the step tread closer.
"Hiiiiiii yah!" he screamed as he jumped up bringing the clarinet up
into the "en garde" position.

To be continued….






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